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"A Flash Of Light" by thinevoicetragic

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         The stars Begin to fall to the ground.
              The Sky is cold and grey.
        I look up at the moon and begin to pray.
                Save me from this day.

                  A flash of Light.
            A Voice in the back of my mind.
             Fear not I wont let you down.
        When you feel as if your going to fall.
           I'll pick you up from the ground.
  I will save you from the evil that comes your way.

           Walking in the graveyard at night.
 free's me from the chaos outside that haunts my mind.




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On Friday December 24th, 2004, An Expired Member (2) writes:
i like it, its got kind of a tragic hero feel to it. its got a romantic feel to it which i like, kind of like somethings happening which you'd love to stop but the world seems to want to happen. nicely possitive in the face of adversity.


On Friday September 10th, 2004, mysticventures (537) writes:
cool stuff - great feel to this!


On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, AMIEVEEL (38) writes:
"graveyard at night" very nice.


On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, Zhee (638) writes:
i love the end... you saved the best for last!


On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, DarkWolf (442) writes:
This one is very cool.. I love the last two lines.. awesome. -Michael


On Monday September 6th, 2004, Northstar (453) writes:
I am really surprised by this one--I like the way you go from day to night and from trying to make it through and then finding comfort in the graveyard at night--nicely done


On Monday September 6th, 2004, suicideseason (2128) writes:
_oh,Meg...the first stanza was so captivating...and i can relate to it alot...very powerful words,my dear.very powerful.nice one,yummy.;)



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