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One wish a Thousand words

            If i had one wish. It would be, that we were ment to be together for all eternity. If I had one wish, it would be, that we were something so pure and so true.
            Yet, my wish is just a whisper, a prayer that will never be answered. Lost in the dark.If you hold me close you'll catch the spark. I'm stuck in a neverending dream and cought in a worlwind of lies.
                 You and I Are.
                  So entwined.
                  So alligned.
    I wish that you were here, my love, my dear,
Feelings so compatable. Our love for eachother, untoutchable.
            Our passions so desireable, yet these feelings make me so uncomfortable.

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On Wednesday January 18th, 2006, An Expired Member (15) writes:

beautiful beautiful beautiful

On Tuesday June 7th, 2005, An Expired Member (22) writes:

This flows beautifuly you prolly dont remember me given teh new account, but this is Immortality Ends, or Mike just sayin hello and commenting on your beautiful works. ~Heretic

On Friday August 27th, 2004, DarkWolf (447) writes:

I love this one.. I would quote lines but there are too many.. excellent write. -Michael

On Thursday August 26th, 2004, NikesRain (1475) writes:

Well thought out and written. So full of flowing emotion with an eye opening end. Nicely done

On Saturday August 14th, 2004, Butterfly (122) writes:

Well written the feeling is conveyed so well

On Saturday August 14th, 2004, elisa (2021) writes:

i'm living this poem....well said. elisa

On Saturday August 14th, 2004, Reverend Machine (91) writes:

My praise, this work is indeed most heartfelt you have captured the longing well, great write...-Dark

On Saturday August 14th, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:

this is beautiful

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