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"Some Thoughts That Don't Connect...." by A Broken Soul

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Shivers quivers
Twitches dishes
Noises poises
Coils foils

Every which way
Everywhere I see your face
Morning boring
Sickness wish list
Classic spastic
Retard Leonard
Miss fist kiss this
Dim grim
Fuck luck
Meow cow
Snore roar
Car far

Every mingled detail
Bring me to such hell
Look on the bright side
Maybe it’s a sign



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On Thursday January 12th, 2006, An Expired Member (39) writes:
damn good job


On Wednesday January 4th, 2006, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:
"Miss fist kiss this" Every mingled dada'sound detail here i/swell done, & still feels like a poem. Good luck.


On Monday December 26th, 2005, TwilightMelodies (1079) writes:
*smiles* Yes...I definately know this feeling...been here a lot lately. You have portrayed it brilliantly. Love it! *Evangel*


On Monday December 26th, 2005, A Broken Soul (103) writes:
Veingo has got the idea right... it's deffinetly a mix of that & trying to distract myself from thoughts of them but failing miserably. Peace~


On Monday December 26th, 2005, veingo (585) writes:
I knew it! *does victory dance*


On Monday December 26th, 2005, weyvern (103) writes:
wow i so feel this poem! exellent write


On Monday December 26th, 2005, veingo (585) writes:
I get it...It,s how when you miss someone, anything, and everything, (no matter how obsure) seems to remind you of them. Am I right? Because I've been there. ^V^


On Monday December 26th, 2005, Crimson Shade (115) writes:
?? - confused... im missing the point of this poem... if anyone understands this drop us a line and let us know... other wise i like the last stanza... every poem should have "look on the bright side" in it some where.



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