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Oh my fucking gawd
Another street phrase
Ill use it here because
You taste so good
Your navel, your forhead
Your neck, your earlobe
The metal encased inside ur ears
Your lips were like heroin
I needed them the most
Your arms wrapped around me
Even when she walked in the door
Neither one wanting to let go
Cuddled closely played roughly
I love that feeling of
Being in control
Pulling you up for another
Hint of those lips, those sensual
Most spectacular lips
Your hair in my eyes
What could be better
You're breathing heavy now
I can feel your chest against mine
I can feel your legs entwined
This was never a good poem
Nothing could ever be good enough
For your beauty, your style, and
Your slient but
Perfect kiss


I dont want any comments on this as it was a complete work of crap, she deserves so much better but Im not good enough.



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On Sunday January 2nd, 2005, K_Love (686) writes:
"Your lips were like heroin I needed them the most" That line fucking made my mouth drop... awesome.. just awesome.. HA I LEFT YOU ANOTHER COMMENT!


On Sunday January 2nd, 2005, K_Love (686) writes:
This was beautiful, you get better everytime I read your work. AND I'M SORRY FOR THE COMMENT CUZ U DESERVE IT SO HA!!! hehe ~Kirsten~


On Sunday January 2nd, 2005, An Expired Member (31) writes:
hmm... it doesnt sound that way. sorry for the comment -ally



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