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Fragile )(Its okay to break me)(

It's all okay
You can touch me
But be careful
I'm prone to breaking
I'll shatter into
More pieces than
You have cells
And
I love you but
The words won't come out
As I glaze over
Your face shimmers away

You can touch me
Since
It's okay to break me
I'd let you smash me
With a sledgehammer
With a sledgehammer
With a bloody rock
If you want
I love you so fucking much
But I hate myself
For being so
Deliciously delicate

You can touch me
It's all good
I can break away
And leave more
For you to love.

(/(Break Me Kirsten))

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On Thursday June 19th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (651) writes:

I love it, and this is certainly a feeling I know. I'm feeling that random repetition and just the fluid tone of the piece, so sincere and real, "It's all good, I can break away, And leave more For you to love." Fucking hell every poem is a new ride entirely with you, but always in an exciting car, always a thrill. Write on...

On Thursday December 21st, 2006, K_Love (686) writes:

*sigh* I'll always love this poem..

On Tuesday January 11th, 2005, An Expired Member (1) writes:

...*stammers*...i'm at a loss of words. absolutely beautiful piece. wow...

On Thursday November 25th, 2004, frozen (741) writes:

that ending was great very good write

On Thursday November 25th, 2004, blue (1756) writes:

"more pieces than cells"...superb. this poem shines!

On Thursday November 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (12) writes:

...wonderful...

On Thursday November 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (45) writes:

wow...beautifully written

On Thursday November 25th, 2004, K_Love (686) writes:

I'm speechless... I don't even know what to say. It's beautiful. Thank you so much. I would never break you... because every piece of you breaks me.

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