DarkPoetry -|- ashottothetemple -|- Things I love to Hate about you.

Things I love to Hate about you.

I can't stand the thought

Of your smile, that grin

Being the last thing I see

I can't stand your mirror

It's cold harsh truth

Staring back at us tonight

I hate your love for this

The filthy things we do

Your breath on my neck

You stare at my scars

I despise that too

You make me feel repulsive

I hate you once more

You make me feel

Like my old self again

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On Tuesday March 20th, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (142) writes:

This was different.I loved the ending.

On Friday January 21st, 2005, bloody LOVEly (112) writes:

its sort of like a wall that will never let us be happy, like all we can do is hate everything. but its not all like that...

On Monday August 30th, 2004, K_Love (686) writes:

I like it, very different from anything I've ever read. I like originality it stands out among crowds. Awesome write. ~Kirsten~

On Saturday August 21st, 2004, evolve (2261) writes:

Brandon, this is superb...probably one of your best...evocative, indeed. Much Love.

On Saturday August 21st, 2004, An Expired Member (35) writes:

anger is a good thing. killer work.

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