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Dying Man's Prayer

Now I Lay Me Down To Sleep
I Pray My Soul To No-one To Keep
I Hope To Die Before I Wake
Cuz The Pain Is More Then I Can Take

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On Sunday March 6th, 2005, SluG (56) writes:

Hey chance, awesome, I like the way you put it into your own words. -S.

On Wednesday November 24th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

LET THE DYING MAN DIE! Good write, Munkey! ~Shane~

On Monday November 1st, 2004, sIo (884) writes:

i agree with stalker you want it to seem the same as the original...just morbid and intriguing...i like it alot.

On Monday November 1st, 2004, SilentStalker (1320) writes:

...cute offbeat of the original...don't ask me why, but I like it...I have a suggestion, though...

On Monday November 1st, 2004, SilentStalker (1320) writes:

...the second line is offbeat...how about 'I pray my soul for none to keep'...? and the same for the fourth line; just kill of the 'cuz'...not only will it give it perfect rhythm, but it just might appeal more to others...

On Wednesday November 30th, 2005, An Expired Member (53) writes:

MANN FUKK DAT SON DU YA THANG ALL DAT PROPER SHIT STAYED IN SCHOOL GOOD WRITE MUNKEY-PERSEVERANCE-

On Monday November 1st, 2004, SilentStalker (1320) writes:

...then again, I talk out of my ass a lot...like I said, merely a suggestion... -Stalker

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