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Myself

Sometimes I believe something crawled out from inside of me trying to escape all
the poisons I pumped into myself. I can’t blame it for leaving but to take away
the most meaningful part of myself was cruel punishment. Don’t you think? Sometimes
I tease myself and watch the others from my life before, witness their talent blooming
while mine withered and died months ago. Envy bitter in the back of my mouth while
I curse myself for feeling that way at all. Sometimes I wonder are they right? Did
I fall? Will I ever get back up again? Or maybe it doesn’t even matter because those
closest to me have never even noticed.

Pretty
Petals
Falling
Slowly
Towards
The
Ground





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On Wednesday May 14th, 2008, empty_remains (77) writes:
oops one to many fallins in there and to think i even proof read this. *sighs*


On Wednesday May 14th, 2008, Bridge (325) writes:
i really liked this. altho i think it would have a better impact if you took away a "falling" or made a pause between them. like, it would have a better flow and the imagery would make sense. and now i don't know if you understand whati 'm saying. anyway, i really did like this.



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