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Incomplete

Goodbye friend.
I hope I will never see you again

There are times when I feel sorry
Sorry for the person I grew up to be
I am sorry that I didn’t became a butterfly
A metamorphosis left incomplete

I am a bird that cannot fly
I am a song without a tune
I am a guitar left on a corner
With broken stings

There was a scream I could hear
And the ring bearer of destiny
Married fate told me to stop

I stopped, caught my breath
Realized at last it wasn’t my blunder
You were the one who slaughtered my soul
The one that poised these feeling

Maybe tomorrow I will grow
Become complete

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On Saturday June 14th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:

wow...very nice...Keep Writing!

On Wednesday June 11th, 2003, An Expired Member (28) writes:

simpily wonderful

On Monday May 12th, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:

Very good analogies. I'm beginning to grasp your natural style of thought and poetry. Keep it up!

On Thursday May 8th, 2003, alone (199) writes:

sad ...i love it

On Thursday May 8th, 2003, Twilight (2097) writes:

"There was a scream I could hear And the ring bearer of destiny Married fate told me to stop" i love those lines

On Monday May 5th, 2003, MindRape (861) writes:

i thought i had commented on this one already but since i haven't i shall do so now....good write in structure and thought. I like the positive stance the poem takes..also like the way it was titled. Good write!

On Friday April 18th, 2003, DoctorAsh (505) writes:

glad t5o C. a small implement of positive reaction ... let us play on the freeways .... very well done, much respect

On Saturday April 12th, 2003, An Expired Member (37) writes:

tres wonderful..contine writing! you are definitely an inspiration

On Thursday April 10th, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (333) writes:

Beautiful poem! Well done, darkside. :)

On Thursday April 10th, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:

I've left my guitar with broken strings for far too long, yet it is my Rebecca and I will treasure it always

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