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"Sun and MooN" by diavolessa

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We still walk
“Life seems to be more
stubborn that we are!” he said
I did not listen!
We were far away at the moment
Human voices were just echoes
Echoes in our head
And we walked in opposite directions
I gasp, I found out
What it’s like to be alone
I found out how it’s like
To feel like noone in this world cares
And the rain fell
It fell heavy on our shoulders
I saw it making no distinguishes
Seagulls were creeping in the air
As they flied in the sky
In a cynical laugh
They made my cry!
“I would have been better if we were
sun and moon,” he said
“so we would have never met!”

(my latest! it was writen in like a few minutes sooo.. well its not much of a great piece!
laterz
~darlin)



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On Monday May 12th, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:
The poem does appear a little rushed but the ending more than makes up for it!


On Thursday March 27th, 2003, Jonas (878) writes:
"stubborn that we are!” he said I did not listen! " and “I would have been better if we were sun and moon,” he said “so we would have never met!” so perfect!!!!q


On Wednesday March 19th, 2003, cre (507) writes:
I like this one - I really like the way you word things. I enjoy reading you very much :)


On Monday March 17th, 2003, Dommi_of_Baphomet (112) writes:
i likes... especially the sun and moon part. ive felt that way about many ppls.. nice job :) <3Dommi



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