DarkPoetry -|- diavolessa -|- TIME: 09:43

TIME: 09:43

Your left me
Like the broken windows of a car
after a fatal crash
Eyes full of tears

TIME: 09:43
You absence fills in the atmosphere, roads that hug the bitter rain and the fog takes a free peonage walk in my brain
I had a bad night sleep
Nothing linked me to that bed, not the warm air or your idea, or the desire to see you in my dreams

Every time light sprains you leave me here
I would like you to go West
And I, just one night to love
I scratch my nerves and lie on you love

time sits still
On 09.43

I get up, wash my face, clean my thoughts…you are not here
Times interchange

On 09:43

the time of abssense, like a planet, like all the seas
And one…
Moment
A dream

darkside March ‘03©

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On Sunday October 10th, 2004, Ravenblade (274) writes:

I'm left speechless by this amzing write, it definately is getting added to my favorites....>Raven<

On Friday May 14th, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:

nothing to say but...WOW...!

On Sunday September 21st, 2003, Chameleon (120) writes:

I really like this piece of work...very progressive.

On Thursday August 7th, 2003, Blood of Winter (367) writes:

Metaphoric ingenious.

On Thursday April 10th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:

yes, yes, yes... this is truely an inspiring & hard piece...i love the street metaphors and use of words: "Like the broken windows of a car: roads that hug the bitter rain," i can feel and hear the breaking heart on cracked pavements... peonage ...

On Thursday March 27th, 2003, Jonas (867) writes:

'ain't no sunshine when she's gone and she's always gone too long every time she goes away'

On Sunday March 16th, 2003, dark_sister (5) writes:

Fantastic. Very creative.

On Friday March 14th, 2003, Six-Out (1824) writes:

Wow. Very nice.

On Friday March 14th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

caught right up to me the last words...'one moment...a dream'

On Thursday March 13th, 2003, cre (508) writes:

I really like this, very good write.

On Thursday March 13th, 2003, Dommi_of_Baphomet (112) writes:

very deep.. i like the way u word things.. ~Dommi

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