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a place to leave

Leave here
From this ill place

Little girl with blue eyes
Leave, leave
whirl in bizarre truths of life
while I wait for one more pain
pain of life, pain of death

curse them all, little girl
the ones that love, caress, kiss
others that kill, hate then heal
others that slowly disintegrate themselves

leave,
give me your loneliness

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On Friday April 29th, 2005, Sin (1623) writes:

dark and lovely...exceptional write ~kristy

On Monday December 27th, 2004, frozen (741) writes:

This is deeply heart and gut touching. About knocked me off my chair like that lightening bolt the third time I read it. I love it, for all the right reasons. It is a very good poem! Again, with your poetry some of the lines blow my mind.

On Tuesday February 24th, 2004, urbanhumility (1377) writes:

touchingly dark.......you have written well my friend..............urban

On Wednesday December 17th, 2003, Stranger (298) writes:

Loved it. Just perfect; not a word askew. The last lines gave me a chill.

On Sunday December 14th, 2003, An Expired Member (4) writes:

*applause*

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