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raped moon

your last word was 'autumn'
the desire between the written verses
On sleepless paths
a raped moon takes her walk

when was the last tango,
the last dance of happiness?
your eyes flicked as stillness
touched the soul

in this profane place
mid-autumn reigned supreme,
on the tunes of an unwritten song
and the corpse of my poetry

should I talk? Should I laugh? Cry maybe?
should I look for you on sleepless nights?
on the verge of insanity
a raped moon takes her walk

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On Wednesday February 22nd, 2006, envolopefuck (270) writes:

Hm...Oh so popular but oh so strange..

On Thursday April 7th, 2005, Serenity (578) writes:

SO beautiful

On Friday March 4th, 2005, Velvet_Raventon (690) writes:

Beautiful expression of sadness... ~V.

On Thursday January 13th, 2005, An Expired Member (19) writes:

very creative and profound.

On Wednesday November 3rd, 2004, purr_verse (1423) writes:

both powerful and beautiful write; simply excellence.

On Sunday October 10th, 2004, Ravenblade (273) writes:

you have an amazing sense of melancholy that I pick up in everything I read...I must read more, thank you for sharing...>Raven<

On Friday May 14th, 2004, aXe FactoR (426) writes:

i couldnt stop reading your works. every piece you wrote paints beautiful and vivid pictures. i love your style. :)

On Friday January 16th, 2004, dark angel (25) writes:

amazing...I dont know what else to say

On Sunday August 17th, 2003, OLd SouL (833) writes:

Eloquent.

On Friday August 15th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:

vicious colors sing flaming sunsets to me

On Friday August 1st, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1101) writes:

"your last word was 'autumn'" Immediately, w/ this first line, I was captured by the raw beauty of this cinema poem There is a splendid rhythm to your style. Bravo!

On Thursday August 7th, 2003, Blood of Winter (367) writes:

I have to go with bakkhus on this one from that line I was absolutely entrapped in your words, I love your style.

On Thursday June 26th, 2003, celestine_moon (53) writes:

its magic how you took these words and transformed them into such quiet beauty. i could see the story unfold. it flowed so well. beautifully done. -moon

On Tuesday June 24th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

"a raped moon takes her walk"...there is so much to say in this poem...every line is alone beautiful and remarkable...gotta love the moon...inspirational and raped in ur eyes..great, great write.

On Friday June 20th, 2003, Raze Drake (103) writes:

I can picture you piece in my mind. Good write.

On Thursday June 19th, 2003, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:

Beautiful. The moon is a very versatile image. It is refreshing to see something original done with it. Bravo!

On Tuesday June 17th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (621) writes:

This is great. It felt like being smoothly attacked in away...but not. Wonderful.~DW~

On Tuesday June 17th, 2003, An Expired Member (13) writes:

Beautiful,i really felt this one,fantastic write,RB..xxx..

On Thursday June 12th, 2003, alone (198) writes:

AMAZING!

On Thursday June 12th, 2003, urbanhumility (1374) writes:

these questions of the night.the intricate way in which you lay them. well done my friend...................urban

On Wednesday June 11th, 2003, Stranger (297) writes:

Wow. Oh my God. Gasp. You get my drift.

On Wednesday June 11th, 2003, pushblood (37) writes:

Absolutely beautiful. Your words leave me awe stricken. Thanks, ~P.B~

On Monday June 9th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1101) writes:

"and the corpse of my poetry," this could be Vivaldi's lost season. Mid-Autumn. tragic and beautiful...

On Monday June 9th, 2003, Bast (895) writes:

beautiful and tragic... cold and brisk like an autumn breeze.

On Saturday June 14th, 2003, boughtwithblood (293) writes:

it crackled... this one is a crisp early frost. brava

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