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Crimson Feelings

Swept away in a multitude
Crimson feelings
So long kept secretly
buried within tombs of my soul

He's set me free

Dragged away by the current
Till shore is gone
Lost in a sea of
Love that pulls me under

He's drowning me

My head under water
Gasp for life
Lungs filled with his
Love, it's overwhelming

He's killing me

Swept away by the multitude
Crimson feelings
My life's been placed
Beside the tombs of my soul

He's buried me

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On Sunday August 8th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

Reminded me of Douglas Adams. Or Poseidon. Thanks for all the fish!

On Thursday August 5th, 2004, inthewakeofshadows (51) writes:

very vivid...nice write! -wake

On Thursday August 5th, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (752) writes:

Lovely flow to this piece - I also like the ending very much, soul buried, but you, apparently, live on without it. Nice imagery! Ciao, T/S

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, serpentine_fire (207) writes:

I like your style of writing. good write and welcome to Dp. ~serpentine~

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, Blood of Winter (367) writes:

I like the way it degraded to a kind of it's already done feeling...

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, indefined (679) writes:

great write girl, i can relate to crimson feelings :)

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, Whisper (136) writes:

I like this right. I haven't read anything like this in awhile. -BT-

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