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Catch Twenty-Two

the choices i make always seem to break
this hell that i call life
they send down rains of unbearable pain
a thunderstorm of strife
but if i choose not to choose then i will still lose
im caught in a catch twenty-two
i can sink or swim, but i still will not win
for i'm cursed in all that i do

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On Tuesday September 26th, 2006, mywristshurt (510) writes:

sucks to be you.. i liked the poem though

On Saturday November 13th, 2004, Savannah (285) writes:

Awesome flow. I really love your works.

On Thursday August 5th, 2004, aXe FactoR (426) writes:

wow, catch 22 was an impressive write...i enjoyed the meaning behind it & every word. welcome to DP :) -MeL-

On Tuesday August 3rd, 2004, Northstar (453) writes:

this poem is so great--I love the rolercoaster metaphor, I love your word choice, structure and rhymen scheme and I also love the insane voice that comes through here I have a couple poems with that voice myself)I look forward to reading more by you

On Tuesday August 3rd, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

I agree with the commenters here who came to visit before me. You should listen to the 13th Floor Elevators. They also recorded a song called "Roller Coaster" (the song title is 2 words).

On Tuesday August 3rd, 2004, An Expired Member (1) writes:

ohh my..I completely in my own way I'm sure...understand and feel this...It's like you were writing for me and my life...amazing @)---;--- ~*~Pixie~*~

On Tuesday August 3rd, 2004, AHHH (238) writes:

awesome - michelle

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