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Ironic

Like dew on the grass
in the blazing sun

such is my life

evrything I held dear

gone

in an instant

My hopes and dreams

vaporized

All my efforts
were for nought

And once again
I find myself

Alone

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On Tuesday August 29th, 2006, gbuff69 (212) writes:

what I appreciate the most in this is the minimal words used to express such complex emotions. excellent.

On Tuesday August 29th, 2006, ashottothetemple (73) writes:

Couldn't have written "my" life any better.. Short and astounding! Brandon

On Saturday April 29th, 2006, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:

It's scary how one moments action, can steel your future and chain you to loneliness. Just like that and pooff...it's all gone. You expressed this well...thankyou for sharing.

On Saturday April 29th, 2006, Ainsof (1838) writes:

ya know, I always seem to find myself alone... and the self I find is not the self I thought I was because the self I thought I was is always someone who is not alone...

On Saturday April 29th, 2006, agentlemenspromise (56) writes:

youre not alone. its just really dark in here. great use of space and it seems to have a hint of subtle urgency.

On Friday April 28th, 2006, Nail Bunny (229) writes:

That's an unfortunate predicament. This work rings true to me, because it's a situation i'm all to familiar with. well done.

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