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Ghost Ship

A rusting hulk
floating aimlessly
in an endless sea
of eternal darkness

forever searching

for the sea
of forgetfullness

In which to drown
all the pain
that betrayal
has heaped upon me

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On Tuesday December 4th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1119) writes:

Fantastic!

On Thursday August 16th, 2007, An Expired Member (1) writes:

nice write. It's short but meaningful.

On Wednesday July 5th, 2006, Urban Shipwreck (1002) writes:

For some reason your ride seems as fruitless as mine. I can relate to this in a number of ways. I dig it. ~Ship!

On Wednesday January 25th, 2006, Lucklost (41) writes:

short but sweet...i like the word choice and how it reminds me of the movie in a way...loved it...BRAVO!!

On Sunday January 22nd, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1165) writes:

god..the word choice..the haunting beauty..*faveclick*

On Monday June 6th, 2005, ONEANDLONELY (138) writes:

To every cloud there is a silver lining. You show all those who have no hope... a way out... "the sea of forgetfullness in which to drown all the pain."

On Friday January 7th, 2005, frozen (756) writes:

awesome write

On Friday September 10th, 2004, suicideseason (2161) writes:

_ghost ship...endless voyage for a tomorrow that doesn't resemble today in the least...floating...lumbering...hoping beyond hope.very compelling.

On Friday September 10th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (502) writes:

"In which to drown all the pain that betrayal has heaped upon me" words so deep they pierce the soul. this was wonderfully written roady! ~sex~

On Thursday September 9th, 2004, indefined (726) writes:

the rusting bulk floating relentlessly in the endless sea of eternal dreams... this was great man, very real to me, this brought up an image of a lonely decaying ship amidst the waves of despair. Top shelf material.

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, Zhaal Nyet Telka (170) writes:

i like this, sweet and to the point ^_^ Â¢Ã¯Â¢Ã¯

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, TheLastDragon (70) writes:

Simple and nice.

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, mysticventures (554) writes:

yea - what girl said!

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, Dayer (204) writes:

likewise

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, girlafraid (581) writes:

stunning and quite vivid...wonderful work

On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, Zhee (643) writes:

simple and profound... nicely done..

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