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"*~The Phoenix That Never Arose From Its Ashes~*" by Zhee

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Cradled in your splintered hands
The cremated carcass screams,
As you embrace the blazing ashes
Igniting your incinerated dreams.

Stale beer memories, burn
The scalded wings of life,
Plundered plumage shrivels
In the face of flaming strife.

On this altar of bestiality
Your innocence did expire,
As your father flicked the lighter
And set your mother on fire…...
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Your pristine tears-
Silently rain on scorched flesh,
Waiting ....
For the phoenix to arise from the ashes….




(This is what my fifteen yr old patient witnessed as a child...)




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On Friday November 12th, 2004, Mr King (623) writes:
Damn!@ The horrors to which our children must face... Thank you for being there for these children. 1LOVE, Seth


On Thursday November 11th, 2004, An Expired Member (12) writes:
i am left without words.


On Thursday November 11th, 2004, indefined (679) writes:
i pause for a moments consideration for the kid. thats shattering. as far as your write goes though bloody brilliant, as usual. a wrenchingly well done work.


On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, Whisper (136) writes:
__________ speechless! ~Matt~


On Sunday November 7th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:
"As you embrace the blazing ashes Igniting your incinerated dreams." this is very visual...in a subtle way. a beautiful sight that is almost out of reach. yet still reachable with the mind. nicely done zhee:)


On Saturday November 6th, 2004, mysticventures (537) writes:
Zhee you are fantastic! a sad yet wonderful write - well done!!!


On Saturday November 6th, 2004, Derelict Dream (42) writes:
Very Mystical. Very nicely done


On Saturday November 6th, 2004, agentlemenspromise (54) writes:
you know fancy words i like that. lol. fitting for the legend of the phoenix. ~Gentlemen


On Saturday November 6th, 2004, Solace (1400) writes:
THe justice, The just, the goddamned uselessness of everything, the loss of anything resembling sanity into something completely un-understandable...


On Saturday November 6th, 2004, Solace (1400) writes:
Like a slaughter of the soul/fire breathing ambience that rushes forth gasoline introductions to a firewall destruction...The mindscape ruined as if by mortar shells, shattered/scattered...


On Friday November 5th, 2004, DarkWolf (441) writes:
horrifying.. what a tragedy.. your writting is excellent.. your heart.. for helping people like this.. is Beautiful.. -Michael


On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, Blood of Winter (367) writes:
good god...I feel sorry for that patient...the writing is captivating though...


On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, suicideseason (2102) writes:
God...i saw and felt it all...you did an amazing job...i'm at a loss for words,but this is one of your best.


On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
I wonder whether it's harder for a person to experience this, or whether it was even harder for you to write it. Perhaps both. Many thanks for all your work you do, both w/your words on paper & the patients you see every day. *faves* ~Shane~


On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, DarkDruidess (195) writes:
oh this brought forth tears...it makes my heart hurt to read this...hugs to you for making me feel today and *hug* to the person going through this


On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, Valentine (491) writes:
- It has to be on my favourite list. It's almost unendurable to read, yet your images just lure me in. ~ Rose.


On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, Valentine (491) writes:
"Your pristine tears- Silently rain on scorched flesh, Waiting .... For the phoenix to arise from the ashes…" ~ you are amazing Zhee . . to have such insight in someone elses emotions evoked from their unbearable experiences. This write is profound . .


On Monday November 1st, 2004, stuart_pid (191) writes:
it amazes me that you can so perfecly understand the thoughts and emotions of someone elses experiences. you must be quite good at what you do because it shows through in your work.


On Monday November 1st, 2004, knightmirror (424) writes:
how terrible.....expressed perfectly by your blossoming talent.....thanks for sharing....i can't even imagine what your patient is going through...****-chris



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