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Why does belief shatter?
Scattering into nonexistence,
With the nothingness cutting
Like a constant reminder
Of your consuming darkness,
As you're left screaming
At the dark face
Of your own emptiness. . .
You rub at your hurt,
Friable under your fingers,
Breaking away -
Till your decay
Lies exposed. . .
Hope burnt out,
Lost in the debris
Of your cremated being,
And you limp along
On your crippled beliefs,
Trying to build your life
With all this fractured faith. . .

(this was just a quick write..)





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On Thursday January 18th, 2007, MGood (78) writes:
Ok now seriously, this is fucking awesome. I will bookmark this one. ~Mary


On Wednesday January 12th, 2005, suicideseason (2141) writes:
"Lost in the debris Of your cremated being, And you limp along On your crippled beliefs,"...Damn...perfectly painted blackness.This trampled me.


On Sunday November 28th, 2004, ShadowFlight (139) writes:
a quick write but fitting. It only takes an instant to lose hope and shatter faith- a devastating instant, to be sure. I like the way this speaks simply for what it is.


On Wednesday October 6th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:
for a quick wirte this was wonderfully done. those are indeed questions for one to ponder


On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, An Expired Member (26) writes:
VERY nicely wrote...seems we can find truth when we let ourselves think the least...keep using your intuition ~UC~


On Thursday September 30th, 2004, An Expired Member (46) writes:
it may be a quick write, but its wonderful work! keep up your writing, Zhee.


On Thursday September 30th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
One truth & one truth & one truth make too many truths. This poem had the effect of cremation on me. Some people use faith as a crutch. Never give up. ~Shane~


On Thursday September 30th, 2004, stuart_pid (217) writes:
fractured faith...how perfectly worded. i wish everyone could be this open minded.


On Wednesday September 29th, 2004, K_Love (688) writes:
It makes so much sense, I like this quick write because I can understand it. Lovely write. ~Kirsten~


On Wednesday September 29th, 2004, Sin (1639) writes:
sometimes all you have are you beliefs and faith and sometimes even they desert you, painfully brilliant like always :) ~kristy



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