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Seeking A Lost World In Pinpoint Pupils…

Striving to incise this veil
Covering your comatose core,
The disease ridden glory
You have prostrated before...

Stench of putrid fear rains
Acrid on your shallow breaths,
Track embellished veins ooze
Funerals of your million deaths.

Succumbs the flailing heart
Choking on the morphine tear,
Life collapses behind the curtain
Of your paralyzed miotic stare....

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On Saturday November 6th, 2004, knightmirror (425) writes:

my goodness.....i should read more of your works more often.....i'm extremely impressed...****-knight

On Friday October 8th, 2004, Angst Queen (471) writes:

a bit haunting is what this is...love your writes...

On Wednesday September 29th, 2004, Solace (1424) writes:

Lappin it up...This is well put together, well done...excuse the coarse comment...

On Saturday September 25th, 2004, Northstar (455) writes:

these words are chilling and course through me in a haunting way

On Friday September 24th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

I like this so much, I'm crushed. It makes me feel so small, so insignificant, so... I just don't know. If I blink, I am embraced by your words there. ~Shane~

On Friday September 24th, 2004, Whisper (137) writes:

Wonderful write. ~Whisper~

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