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"So..You Killed Yourself..." by Zhee

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The epitome of despair
The exasperating defeat,
Drowned in the bloody pool
Staining the barren concrete.

Reflected in bleeding eyes
Shards of broken dreams,
The abysmal emptiness within
That only pain ever redeems.

Fall like the blazing angel
The enraged heaven releases,
Let tears put out your fire
While you rest in pieces....



Copyright 2004 Zheala

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On Thursday December 16th, 2004, chaos (25) writes:
very cool, loved it.


On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, Storm (184) writes:
"While you rest in pieces..." I must say that was the best last line I've ever read. Great poem, just simply great. ~s


On Saturday October 16th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:
"Fall like the blazing angel The enraged heaven releases," i loved those lines. imaginative and they paint the most entrancing picture. well done.


On Friday October 8th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:
wow...another beautiful work. chalk one up for you


On Friday September 24th, 2004, MABUS (21) writes:
this pulls me in and keeps me reading...which is hard to do due to my short attention span


On Friday September 24th, 2004, Savannah (285) writes:
Wow!! I love this - AWESOME


On Friday September 24th, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:
i enjoyed the last line "While you rest in pieces" great write all together~~~Grave


On Tuesday September 21st, 2004, Rain In The Willows (821) writes:
beautiful work, I love your imagery Kya


On Tuesday September 21st, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
but as a psychologist, (and poet) you yourself have learned to see so much more, because you just have to. Thanks again, Zhee! ~Shane~


On Tuesday September 21st, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
My grave marker should perhaps read 'RUST IN PIECES', as a reference to my disability & use of a wheelchair. That's all that some people see...


On Tuesday September 21st, 2004, indefined (679) writes:
heh, i agree with anth, cool work and cool title. exceptional. each stanza had vivid impact. talentedly done.


On Tuesday September 21st, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
I would use the last stanza as a tombstone marker, but not on mine...


On Tuesday September 21st, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
I'd never kill myself, but I think this would be something you might use in a tombstone. :) ~Shane~


On Tuesday September 21st, 2004, Anth (1571) writes:
nice work,and message,i really liked that first verse,great imagery and wording,cool title i think too,


On Tuesday September 21st, 2004, DarkWolf (441) writes:
Intense indeed. wow.. this was amazing. The last stanza is wickedly worded. Very very well done.. wow. -Michael


On Tuesday September 21st, 2004, An Expired Member (19) writes:
intense



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