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CUT!CUT!CUT! (for mysticventures)

In the undulating flow
Of red crystalline springs,
You drown, my broken angel
Cursing your splintered wings.

[The blade screams (Cut! Cut! Cut!)
Pretend your flesh is theirs,
If you cut far enough, maybe
God will hear your prayers…]

See the cathartic glow
Within the rents you create,
Behold the open wound –
Bleeding out your hate.

[The voices wail (Cut! Cut! Cut!)
Till porcelain skin turns gray,
If the mind is numb, maybe
These demons will go away…]

Slashed on a razor’s edge
Choking memories smiled,
Etched within your soul
Immaculate dreams defiled.

[The demons plead (Cut! Cut! Cut!)
Down to the very bone,
If you cut deep enough, maybe
Daddy will leave you alone…]

(just another perspective on cutting.. as eloquently portrayed by mysticventures' "a cutter's hymn")
P.S. I don't support cutting either!

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On Thursday January 27th, 2005, knightmirror (426) writes:

remarkable dedication....beautiful aliteration....****-knight

On Friday January 7th, 2005, An Expired Member (3) writes:

your vocabulary is astonishing =)

On Saturday November 13th, 2004, darkangelXlll (175) writes:

WOW! bravo...this is such an amazin write i really loved it. i wasnt going to read it cuz the title but WOW glad i did! ~darlin :D

On Saturday November 13th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (865) writes:

Amen! Kill them if their stupid enough to wana die...here how 'bout we slit your wrists FOR you...?

On Saturday November 13th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (865) writes:

*anti-cut* however, you still write beautifully Zhee...

On Saturday November 13th, 2004, Savannah (290) writes:

I do support cutting, being a cutter/burner, myself. So I loved this!! Awesome work

On Friday October 8th, 2004, Angst Queen (471) writes:

i think my own demons are screaming from this. great write zhee

On Wednesday September 22nd, 2004, Twilight (2105) writes:

we should kill cutters for trying to kill themselves.

On Tuesday September 21st, 2004, stuart_pid (217) writes:

i think you may have it. i particularly liked the line, "if the mind is numb, maybe these demons will go away." another fantastic piece zhee.

On Monday September 20th, 2004, DarkWolf (447) writes:

As I have said.. I love poems on cutting.. My Mate and I both do. but I think we see it different than most.. This was beautifully worded. Well done. -Michael

On Monday September 20th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

Hi Zhee! I have a poem entitled "CUTTING ROOM FLOOR", which I'll post so you can see some (not so) subtle differences on the subject. I just read this, and then thought of my own material.

On Monday September 20th, 2004, mysticventures (547) writes:

and thank you Zhee :)

On Monday September 20th, 2004, mysticventures (547) writes:

excellent work! truely much more elegant than mine as well !!!

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