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"Elective Subjugation (Why Don't You SEE??!!)" by Zhee

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(to a patient....)

Flaunt the mutilated ugliness,
Curse your condemning stars,
Bury the mortifying shame
In your exhibitionistic scars.

Barricade the frigid passages
To where the fragile ego lies,
The deluge of prismatic tears
Mourning its tormented demise.

Rave blatant persecution
Wreaked by the psychotic mind,
Blind the self to the sacrilege
Of the innocence once enshrined.

Embrace the vacant threats,
Take sanctuary in your denial,
Indulge in self-inflicted humiliation
So you can feel worthwhile…




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On Friday October 8th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:
amazing work, powerful


On Friday September 24th, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:
beautiful, they be shut down now! another killer write.~~~Grave


On Friday September 17th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
Thankfully, I'm not one of your patients. Poetry prevents me from becoming this. Your word choices are very interesting. No qualms here.


On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, Crystal Passion (257) writes:
oh wow, powerful message, i am impressed by your in depth perceptions


On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, A Broken Soul (103) writes:
wow, amazing word choice...


On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, mysticventures (546) writes:
damn Zhee - that was an awsome write!!


On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, MelvinOliverDrauma (552) writes:
are you sure this isn't to all your patients or maybe just everyone in general


On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, MelvinOliverDrauma (552) writes:
I liked this poem I think it's very well done even though it kind of made me feel bad


On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, Anth (1613) writes:
superb rhyme here,love your style,observations to admire here and a terrific expression of such



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