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i crawl along the water's edge
to wash away the pain,
as the jaggedness pours
like crucifying rain,
now the sun scorches
as this spirit slowly dies -
for the million storms
have left
-
a desert
in
my
eyes
...

watching the mutated faces
that swallow me whole,
while i lament and bury
the children of my soul,
in this barren land
my blood slowly dries -
for the rains of long ago
have left
-
a desert
in
my
eyes
...

all that was aspired
was crushed in shackled fists,
now a river flows down
these numb, splintered wrists,
the scars will remain
a testament to the skies -
whose bloody tears
have left
-
a desert
in
my
eyes
...

~my thoughts are stained with that blood...
my dreams are born from those wounds...~




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On Sunday November 28th, 2004, ShadowFlight (139) writes:
loss and agony punishing yourself as if you'd thrown something away. an injustice here, taking responsibility for that which you can't control, something beyond your strength, yet not a weakness. Reading a lot into this, I know. Great write


On Friday October 8th, 2004, Angst Queen (471) writes:
i'm...speechless...compleatly speechless


On Friday September 17th, 2004, stuart_pid (217) writes:
*speechless*


On Monday September 13th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
Amieveel is right! It does get better & better, & as you know, I'm always looking forward to it. ~Shane~


On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, Savannah (290) writes:
this flows really nice - good work


On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, AMIEVEEL (38) writes:
damn! your stuff gets better and better!!! very impressed.


On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, Lady_Lilith (113) writes:
Very nice. I like the sentences between ~~, fit perfectly. *Lilith*


On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, MelvinOliverDrauma (555) writes:
finely crafted


On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, anth (1610) writes:
sublime work, the repeating verse is flawlessly done, expressed so well


On Wednesday September 1st, 2004, Northstar (456) writes:
this is exquisitely done--the images, flow, and structure are so on point--I really feel what you are expressing here



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