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"Ramblings Of The Psychotic Mind" by Zhee

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where does it come from?
this defiled reality...
shards of fragmented self
that cut through
your deafness,
your mute existence;
rendered powerless -
paralyzed by glacial fear,
the furor of demons released -
into the blazing cauldron
of melting veracities
where you purge and putrefy,
absolve and decay,
exist and perish;
clinging to all that remains -
the voices in your head,
the bullet in your brain,
and the memories of razor blades
that your blood managed to stain.




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On Monday October 31st, 2005, murderedhearts_blood (11) writes:
wow! this is really really awesome! i love this!


On Monday January 31st, 2005, island warrior (300) writes:
Brilliant.


On Friday October 8th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:
beautiful writing


On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, girlafraid (577) writes:
i'm not sure how i have missed your work all this time, but it's very appealing to me and right up my alley...i'm loving it so far


On Wednesday September 8th, 2004, Dayer (200) writes:
this is beautiful writing, very impressive


On Monday August 16th, 2004, AMIEVEEL (38) writes:
love your work, especially this one! can't wait to read more.


On Monday August 16th, 2004, AMIEVEEL (38) writes:
the line "paralyzed by glacial fear" gave me chills just reading it.


On Monday August 9th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
Mick Jagger (of the Rolling Stones) once told people, "It's okay to let yourself go as long as you can let yourself back." You've done it here.


On Monday August 9th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
Zhee, With this poem I'm reminded of an Amboy Dukes song (w/Ted Nugent) called 'Journey To The Center Of The Mind. I like this.


On Monday August 9th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
Reality is only illusion. Reality is all confusion. Insanity is the solution. Excellent extrapolation. Love your verbal vindication.


On Saturday August 7th, 2004, Zara Synn (75) writes:
"And the memories of razor blades that your blood managed to stain" I really love that one, too. Ties into the insanity; the confusion of it all, not really knowing when, how, or why you do things..it just somehow "manages" to be.


On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, purr_verse (1423) writes:
mmm...lovely vocabulary! "into the blazing cauldron of melting veracities" ... i love this. excellently evoked; excellent write.


On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, indefined (679) writes:
where indeed? a question from the depths of the void. great write.


On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, DarkWolf (441) writes:
"and the memories of razor blades, that your blood managed to stain" I love that line, thank you for this one -Michael


On Tuesday August 3rd, 2004, Soulseeker (119) writes:
*that cut through your deafness* Powerful line... a powerful write in general! Bethany


On Tuesday August 3rd, 2004, Northstar (453) writes:
awesome whirlwind of emotional expression--beautiful stylistically



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