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Don't mind this song
It's just a
Product of my fault

What is the reason
For this hostility suddenly
What can I do to prove myself to you

Is there a verbal key
That unlocks you
That causes a sudden revelation

You may be right
But what's right between friends?
What's right between the two of us

I don't think I understand your reason
I believe your defense is only a front
You won't let anything go
Anything I could say would come back and make me feel terrible
I'm too torn apart to want to work it out
I'm so bothered that I just can't bother anyway

Give a little
Give a little long
I miss the sympathy

I'm trying to balance
It's not as easy as it seems
It's not easier

Give a little give a whole lot
Give me a benefit
Give me some breathing room

You don't understand the way my emotions come and go

I don't think I understand your reason
I believe your defense is only a front
You won't let anything go
Anything I could say would come back and make me feel terrible
I'm too torn apart to want to work it out
I'm so bothered that I just can't bother anyway

Acoustic melodies
Fluttering through the room
Patience, patience patience
I don't want to know anymore
This is such a feeling that I don't want to be there

I'll always be wrong to you

I don't think I understand your reason
I believe your defense is only a front
You won't let anything go
Anything I could say would come back and make me feel terrible
I'm too torn apart to want to work it out
I'm so bothered that I just can't bother anyway

I don't think you understand my problem
It might be nice to let you know
It might be nice to sit somewhere else



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On Friday August 27th, 2004, Six-Out (1798) writes:
The repitition of the verse, the entire piece. It has a feel of remorse turned to apathy. Wonderfully written.


On Friday August 27th, 2004, ShadowFlight (140) writes:
yet another one that needs to be recorded.


On Friday August 27th, 2004, capt_funguy (992) writes:
calm , cool , and twisting ... i hear the music in the backround ... and see where the eyes can go , as the conversation goes 'round ... atmospheric , and again ... cool ... funguy


On Friday August 27th, 2004, An Expired Member (14) writes:
wow, i'd love to hear this, amazing work, weldone


On Friday August 27th, 2004, Lydia Jade (783) writes:
beautifuly written...a masterful peice indeed....



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