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"Eva Song" by antiScripsony

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Eva's on the phone
Talking to her friend
Because that's the only way she can get in touch

Eva Victoria
Won't pick up the phone
She's probably having sex or working

Eva talks to her friend on the phone
He gets bad reception at home
But it's nice to talk to Eva

Eva's not on the phone
He called her when she wasn't home
Her boy picked up and asked to take a message
Said he'd call back later
Hi, you've reached Eva
I'm not home right now
But leave a message
But leave a message

Eva's in Victoria
She's too far away
I want to look at her but she just sits still

Eva got a job
But no one knows about it
Because she's gone, gone, gone.

Eva no longer wishes him adieu
It's probably no good for her too
He misses Eva

Eva's not on the phone
He called her when she wasn't home
Her boy picked up and asked to take a message
Said he'd call back later
Hi, you've reached Eva
I'm not home right now
But leave a message
But leave a message

I wish that Eva would come back
I wish she wasn't busy or unlucky
I want to spend an hour with Eva
Before I crack my head on the wall
Jumping on the bed
Maybe she knows what I'm doing wrong

Eva has a landline
Eva has an answering machine
Her voice is as pretty as her
I'm calling for Eva
I want to talk to Eva

Eva's not on the phone
He called her when she wasn't home
Her boy picked up and asked to take a message
Said he'd call back later
Hi, you've reached Eva
I'm not home right now
But leave a message
But leave a message

Eva thinks the band is falling apart
When we get along fine
Eva just wants us to shut up
Break up
Go back where we came from

Get on the fucking phone.



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On Friday August 20th, 2004, antiScripsony (38) writes:
'twas an intentional effect, yes. I could've just as easily used pronouns, but those didn't fit as well into the intention of the poem.


On Friday August 20th, 2004, An Expired Member (35) writes:
Not my type of poem. But you did excellent and I agree with Legacy you kinda did you Eva too much. But dont feel the poem was bad. You do have skills.


On Friday August 20th, 2004, An Expired Member (7) writes:
I dont know whether to congradulate or condemn this piece. For one, the repetition is a bit overbearing but...I can understand it as well. Infatuation with this Eva person would cause one to become obsessed.


On Friday August 20th, 2004, An Expired Member (7) writes:
In that, the name Eva will come into his mind more often than not, and the idea was portrayed well. BUT if you want to keep the person's attention, the use of the word Eva is a bit much...use is borderline overuse in this piece, but I certainly liked it.



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