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Traveling down a hall... Blurred visions.. A quest unknown, unanswered. The soul seeks it, but you do not know what it is. Love is not the quest or the key to. An art... to hunt.. to looks for that that is too far gone. Too unknown. An alien idea. To find a home, deep in this abyss? No, rest. No, home. To hope. To die in this place empty and cold, sweet hearts no long stand as strong. We enter, we leave. One by one. A quest incomplete a quest started, unknown. To end, like this?



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On Saturday August 28th, 2004, elisa (2018) writes:
this is the hall in Pink Floyds 'The Wall' ...wonderful poem:) elisa


On Thursday August 26th, 2004, Northstar (455) writes:
I really like the feel of this piece. However, in my very humble opinion the line "To die in this place empty and cold, sweet hearts no long stand as strong"


On Thursday August 26th, 2004, Northstar (455) writes:
doesnt make sense to me and it seems to not fit with the rest of this. Well done overall,though,I can really relate to the space you are writing from


On Thursday August 26th, 2004, mysticventures (546) writes:
very well done - describing a place where most of us spend our time


On Thursday August 26th, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:
Your mind must work in such an intelligent philosophical way to have come up with this. Either that, or you're drugged up. Whichever way, good write. ~Wish Upon A Star


On Thursday August 26th, 2004, anth (1611) writes:
this was a joyous ride,space odysey like,in an inertia of confusion



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