"The Key to Me" by Soulseeker
| Six-Out |
| stormtalk |
| anth |
| Angel With The Scabbed Wings |
| MEATGRINDER MAN |
| A bit on the possessive side |
| These Tears (Bittersweet Time) |
| A True Heart Break |
| The PoeT's giFt/The PoEt's CurSe |
| The Struggle For Sincerity |
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** The only art my hands ever made any sense of..** Welcome to Bethany... A soul dressed in black and white.. Sometimes cotton.. sometimes lace.. The darkness fades but chokes me more than the light ever seemed to.. Here the soul sits perched on a glass, a glass of opportunities.. Where I can fall in and drown.. or remain perched and proud.. A few tears to show the world the realitiy of life.. and the hardships a soul may carry.. With fights of emotions.. the ones that usually win.. A rose added for beauty.. Frail in full bloom.. Set to remind me how to control my ego.. I'll never be in the same vicinity of the rose nor do I ever want to be.. The wings are symbolic to my lack of roots and my habit of losing ground.. The burns? Now what exactly is a soul or a human without any burn? Without any scar? Let's ponder on the title now.... K E Y No, I never handed you a tangible key.. I never had to.. A Key to Me comes with every post, from every word ... Now there a choices you hold.. To better your intellect and drop the judgemental stance.. or ignore it all together.. You could run away without so much as a second glance to me.. or come to terms with reality.. This is my Thanks to MOST of DP for not being afraid to show real emotions and true selves.. The key for me to glance among souls.. and relate or debate.. For every post.. for every word.. It meant a lot.... You'll never need me to hand you any key.. all you need is to escape ... from the artifical smile.. Unlock the door.... now Copyright 2004 Soulseeker
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On Monday November 7th, 2005, Mistress Shadow (356) writes:
Truely amazing. Hopefully you'll share more of yourself in the near furture. ~T~
On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, Savannah (290) writes:
This was an insightful look into your thoughts... wonderful work
On Thursday November 4th, 2004, An Expired Member (10) writes:
the write with the picture makes a heady concoction. this post seems like heaven coz im very high
On Monday November 1st, 2004, Angel With The Scabbed Wings (43) writes:
wow that was amazing. you upgraded to gold member ooooo ahhhhh oooo. i still love your work
On Saturday October 30th, 2004, indefined (713) writes:
hell yeah. excellent write indeed, wonderful work.
On Saturday October 30th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:
oh wow...I love the picture,I think thats fantastic...
On Saturday October 30th, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:
this was absolutely beautiful...~The wings are symbolic to my lack of roots
and my habit of losing ground.. ~ loved it!
On Friday October 29th, 2004, ShadowFlight (139) writes:
Your literary use of "a glass of opportunity" was wonderfully profound... a superb work from the heart *and* soul
On Friday October 29th, 2004, Sin (1637) writes:
this is simply lovely,i could hear your sincerity in every word, and the fairy is beautiful ~kristy
On Friday October 29th, 2004, FallenFaith (47) writes:
Bethany this is beautiful. Goin straight to my favorites.
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