"Touch Me" by Soulseeker
| Six-Out |
| stormtalk |
| anth |
| Angel With The Scabbed Wings |
| MEATGRINDER MAN |
| A bit on the possessive side |
| These Tears (Bittersweet Time) |
| A True Heart Break |
| The PoeT's giFt/The PoEt's CurSe |
| The Struggle For Sincerity |
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I can feel your fingers caressing my skin.
They wonder amilessly across my scattered freckles. They soothe my complexion's imperfections. I can feel your lips brush against my cheek, the warmth of your breath attacks my neck. Your lips part to swallow me, to awaken me. I can feel your words perice my ears. They shock me, they push me, they comfort me. I can feel them where words count the most. Touch me if you must, touch me if I ask. Touch the ignored places, the places typical people choose not to touch, choose not to see. But please be cautious, for once it is finally touched it will yearn, it will long to be touched more, more than what time offers in this society. Touching can be more than physical contact. I need to feel.... I need this. Touch me, touch my soul, that's what counts the most..... Copyright 2004 Soulseeker
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On Friday October 15th, 2004, An Expired Member (55) writes:
wow... i really like this. i felt hands running over my body. uite eerie, but the poem is great!
On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, Angst Queen (471) writes:
deep work here, i'm ashamed i didn't look into your work's sooner
On Monday September 27th, 2004, FallenFaith (47) writes:
I will touch you. hehe. umm actually it is hard to reple to your works because we talk so much but i must say this is good. did you tell me about shane?
On Wednesday August 25th, 2004, scorpionstale (27) writes:
Wow that's deep. Really capturing from the start. "Touch the ignored places" makes me feel untamed, changes my view on romance. Thanks.
On Tuesday August 24th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:
this is hot-fucken hot. a true definition. you startle me with intellect.
On Friday August 20th, 2004, Mr King (623) writes:
a beautiful soul seeking other beautiful souls to touch... you touch us all... Love, Seth
On Sunday August 8th, 2004, Blood of Winter (367) writes:
A simple plea that goes unanswered for so many...lovely piece
On Saturday August 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:
i really like this...i agree with north star
On Saturday August 7th, 2004, Northstar (455) writes:
very nicely done--you express here what I think many of us feel--especially the ending
On Saturday August 7th, 2004, braindeadpoet (127) writes:
touch, touch, touch...your yearning pushes me off the cliff. Beautiful job---jer
On Friday August 6th, 2004, sixsixnine (496) writes:
touch my soul* fucking awesome! i love the physical visuals but even more the spiritual ending~ very very nice *669*
On Thursday August 5th, 2004, stormtalk (909) writes:
This work holds great ideas, especially the idea of awakening the ignored places in a person. Also - wander, not wonder, and pierce, not perice. I particularly like the transition throughout the work from physical to more theoretical/thoughful.
On Thursday August 5th, 2004, DoctorAsh (506) writes:
Tis very lovely - and i must hand you a shiny red trophy - Wonderful type. [D&A]
On Thursday August 5th, 2004, DarkWolf (447) writes:
Beautiful. You have touched me with this one, where it counts. Thank you for sharing it. -Michael
On Thursday August 5th, 2004, Angel With The Scabbed Wings (43) writes:
it doesnt seem to hard to do yet its hard to find someone to do it. its a sad sad world. great write.
On Thursday August 5th, 2004, GirlintheBox (50) writes:
hey, sounds like what i was telling my boyfriend tonight! (lol) can i borrow this? i promise ill give you credit for writing it ;) *krystal*
On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
Of all your poems I've read, this is the most amazing of them all! I find this poem of yours more tranquil than the rest. Calm is best. Calm is best.
On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, Soulseeker (120) writes:
Thank you shane! Thanks for pushing me and confusing me until I learned to make sense of the circles... Bethany
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