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there once was a girl
 who thought she was ugly inside
but along came a boy
who saw the beauty her eyes failed to hide

three little words
 is all the boy wanted to say
but insted of sharing his feelings
 the girl hid herself away

the boy's had just a taste
 of what he cant keep
but that hurts the girl
 just a little too deep

they have taken this to far
 in matters of the heart
so they smile softly
 as they push themselfs apart







toy soldier

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On Thursday June 7th, 2007, carlosjackal (1731) writes:
The 1st stanza made my heart lift up and the rest was so sad but true in many ways. Excellent write. -Carl


On Friday February 3rd, 2006, MindRape (863) writes:
there's something about your poetry that just seems.....familiar. I can't quite put my finger on it. But i feel like i know you......love this piece. It's actually a very unique perspective


On Wednesday December 7th, 2005, lordshadow (199) writes:
awesome as always.


On Monday November 14th, 2005, Butterfly (122) writes:
wow i wanna cry, so sad


On Thursday October 27th, 2005, Sin (1622) writes:
oh..this is crushing but all too familiar...its so sad that we push what we want most away out of fear..excellently captured ~kristy


On Tuesday October 11th, 2005, An Expired Member (43) writes:
..i love this poem it makes me really sad but i have to love it..


On Tuesday October 11th, 2005, Liz (401) writes:
*too deep... and *themselves... Sorry. I try not to be an asshole about editing issues, but this piece is too good to not be flawless.


On Wednesday October 12th, 2005, toy soldier (38) writes:
thank you liz, good lookin out.



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