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Wraped in the solitude of night,
I can feel poetry flowing through my veins.
Yearning,
pleading,
no… screaming to be let free,
unbound,
to live again.
Yet held deep within my own darkness,
with only the moon to guide my ink in to the unknown depths of paper,
I lack the works to describe this feeling,
this state of mind,
this short lived view of life.

In all simplicity,
it is
simply poetic.






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On Monday January 10th, 2005, MindRape (863) writes:
this is absolutly the most incredible poem i think i've ever read. I know this feeling all too well and no matter what i said i never found the words to say what i wanted about it.


On Monday January 10th, 2005, MindRape (863) writes:
You have captured this feeling in a poetic snap shop, perfect - Much respect M.R.


On Monday January 10th, 2005, stormtalk (881) writes:
"Simply poetic," indeed. Perhaps not the most original subject matter, but, instead, a feeling to which we can all relate... keep writing... you'll find the words.


On Wednesday December 8th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
Words are bullets. You've chosen them well. Thank you.


On Saturday October 23rd, 2004, BleedSilver (372) writes:
This is a good way to put it...simply poetic. Very beautiful ending, soldier.


On Sunday October 17th, 2004, lordshadow (199) writes:
From one soldier to another... simply awesome.


On Wednesday September 29th, 2004, Butterfly (122) writes:
This is great. You're an awesome poet. And you have no Idea. Great write.


On Wednesday September 29th, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:
a wonderful poem explaining what ever poet goes threw, well done.~~~Grave


On Wednesday September 29th, 2004, DarkWolf (441) writes:
Very beautifully done. Excellent write. -Michael


On Wednesday September 29th, 2004, batman nipples (2256) writes:
This stole my breath. Excellent.


On Wednesday September 29th, 2004, Zhee (638) writes:
this was beautiful.. i wrote a poem abt something similar... reminded me of that.. but this was superb!



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