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Note:- This is a song. It should be read as a lyrical piece

The moon sits still,
Like the drink in your hand,
I touch your lips,
With the broken glass,
I felt so cold,
I touched your warm touch,
I wished I was more,
Than what I am;

I am concerned,
Concerned for you,
I have this feeling,
Feeling I might hurt you,
I'll Keep Away,
Keep away for a while,
Until I Know,
Know that I'm fine;

Let Me Burn You,
Burn With The Sun,
Let Me Hurt You,
I Show You The Gun,
You Know How I'm Feeling,
Feeling Inside,
Try To Understand,
I'm Not Much Of A Man;

I am concerned,
Concerned for you,
I have this feeling,
Feeling I might hurt you,
I'll Keep Away,
Keep away for a while,
Until I Know,
Know that I'm fine;

I drink from your cup,
You opened your arms,
I spat in your face,
You smiled at me,
I held you real close,
My hand's round your neck,
I held you real tight,
You smiled at me;

This is abuse,
This is rape,
This is something,
You will never know;

I am concerned,
Concerned for you,
I have this feeling,
Feeling I might hurt you,
I'll Keep Away,
Keep away for a while,
Until I Know,
Know that I'm fine;



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On Monday January 2nd, 2006, braindead_poet (577) writes:
*nods* i am familiar with these words, this situation.... the circumstances.... hang in there.


On Monday January 2nd, 2006, elisa (1991) writes:
love of a hesitant heart......an honest divulgence of brutal feelings...


On Wednesday July 28th, 2004, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:
I would love to hear the music to these lyrics.. ..::Fairy::...


On Friday December 26th, 2003, Methos (154) writes:
Interesting work dazzeled with hatred and yet still i see sprouts of loves blossom that you surely wish would die...great write



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