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Don't ask me to love you,
I can't commit to a truth,
I can't admit that I do,
'Cause I'm just another lost youth,
I curled up in my couch,
And dreamt of the day we meet,
I smiled as I saw you in my head,
But don't ask me to love you,
I can't commit to that truth,
Even if I already do,
'Cause I'm just another lost youth,
Love me back and hold my hand,
Whisper to me the way you feel,
I love the way you talk to me,
And the way you make me feel,
Just don't ask me to love you,
I can't commit to that truth,
I can't admit that I do,
'Cause I'm just another lost youth,
But at least you helped me find my soul,
The one I lost all those years ago,
What the hell, I'll commit to you,
I think I can spend my life with you,
I'll say I love you,
If you'll say 'I Do';
Well, do you?
I didn't think so.
So don't ask me to love you.
Even though I do.



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On Thursday April 24th, 2008, The Spiral Downward (387) writes:
The evasive mysticism in every word was gripping and helped align all the mysteries the words contained. Great Write


On Saturday May 20th, 2006, Nalle (68) writes:
Thank you very much for joining it. ~Lacrima


On Thursday February 23rd, 2006, Marek (140) writes:
I read this after reading MR's tribute to it. Solid ending, and once again I can relate. Seems to be happening a bit in this sleep deprived and love denied state. *sigh, tear* Repitition well used...


On Tuesday February 14th, 2006, MindRape (863) writes:
I started a comment and it just sorta flowed right out of me....instead your comment inspired my poetry :) Check out "Worth The Sin" in my portfolio


On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, Atalanta (43) writes:
Woa, such powerful words speak such powerful truth.


On Sunday November 9th, 2003, Mischevious Princess (53) writes:
Very,very nice write Razor.... You're an insperation to me !~Forever Hiding In The Shadows~! S_P



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