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"A Soldier's Dawn" by mysticventures

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On Thursday April 17th, 2008, the-rapist (369) writes:
and all the red tape that goes with it. more to come? g


On Thursday April 17th, 2008, Zophiel (349) writes:
Damn stright MV. A-fuckin'-men.


On Friday September 21st, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:
how true... our inner turmoils and trials bare no resemblance and will never compare to those of a soldier.... simple, but hits with the force of a mac truck


On Monday July 24th, 2006, sixsixnine (567) writes:
damn you! this is love...... huh?


On Saturday July 15th, 2006, Sin (1639) writes:
stinging and powerful, like a slap to the face...its so good to see you posting again ~kristy


On Wednesday July 12th, 2006, Michelle Xiao (499) writes:
Great piece. just a really raw and clear portrayal.


On Tuesday July 11th, 2006, The Fool (1001) writes:
It was just incredible the few words here spoke loudly and higher with each one. ~nightly


On Tuesday July 11th, 2006, An Expired Member (26) writes:
I can relate totally with just these few words. I'm a Marine. Great piece.


On Tuesday July 11th, 2006, sIo (883) writes:
this makes my stomach queezy.


On Tuesday July 11th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:
Ouch! Such truth in every single line. Julia~


On Tuesday July 11th, 2006, Army Barbie (493) writes:
*Sigh*


On Tuesday July 11th, 2006, Army Barbie (493) writes:
I dunno how to comment on this. Probably because I've seen it damnit.



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