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Autumn Commeth

Hallowed is . . . the season come

Ere the warmth . . . of summer gone

All earths colors . . . blend as one

Velvet leaves . . . thru rivers run

Enter earth . . . from whence they come

Nevermore . . . to know the sun

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On Thursday April 17th, 2008, Zophiel (349) writes:

I know you don't post here anymore friend but this deserves a comment. I never should have missed this when it was posted.

On Sunday June 18th, 2006, Tonights Decision (166) writes:

this is great! solem is the word.

On Friday March 10th, 2006, An Expired Member (9) writes:

You deserved the award, THIS IS MASTERPIECE !!!

On Tuesday November 15th, 2005, happilydepressed (214) writes:

I bow before your work

On Monday November 7th, 2005, urbanhumility (1363) writes:

beautiful and solem.......just as autumn..............well done and congratulations..........well earned...............urban

On Saturday November 5th, 2005, Gold Dust Woman (167) writes:

congratulation on your victory ~gothicangel~

On Wednesday October 26th, 2005, Jay Jii (334) writes:

Congrats on your victory!

On Saturday October 22nd, 2005, Aethelwyne (70) writes:

Whoa thats Beauty. I dont just see it, i feel it, smell it, hell i could probably feel it if i tried.

On Friday October 21st, 2005, Reverend Machine (91) writes:

This was a well constructed peice, very defined, yet free and un restricted. Congradulations. I look forward to reading more of your work.-Dark

On Wednesday October 19th, 2005, ApathysKiss (463) writes:

a simple and an 'ethereal' better outlook than a 'death' season =) congratulations!

On Wednesday October 19th, 2005, Gideon Lost (187) writes:

I like the way this was put together. The flow is balanced, almost like riding a see saw. Also, I like the imagery. "Enter earth . . . from whence tehy come" - this is a great line. Worthy of winning. -Gideon

On Monday October 17th, 2005, blue (1739) writes:

yuppers.. I'm really diggin' this. Damn fine writing. ~b

On Sunday October 16th, 2005, blue (1739) writes:

Well shit! It's no wonder you won. This was just fantastic. Superb. Outstanding. Exemplary. ..need I continue? ~b

On Tuesday October 11th, 2005, mysticventures (545) writes:

you are too sweet glass :)

On Thursday October 6th, 2005, vaultgrl (236) writes:

it's just splendiferous!!!!!.....i love it all....great write.."Nevermore....to know the sun".....beautiful

On Thursday October 6th, 2005, Mistress Shadow (364) writes:

This is perfect! ~T~

On Monday October 3rd, 2005, GothicBlack (268) writes:

this has such a calming effect, much like a prayer said at night to a scared little child. I love this poem. So short yet perfectly sweat. ~gothic~

On Monday October 3rd, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (552) writes:

this is just lovely

On Wednesday September 28th, 2005, Michelle Xiao (499) writes:

Beautiful, I could recite this in my sleep.

On Wednesday September 28th, 2005, glasshouse (801) writes:

perfect in rhythm and substance. VERY nicely done. -Glass

On Tuesday October 11th, 2005, glasshouse (801) writes:

I keep coming back to this because I am so thoroughly impressed. This was delicate and gentle and pure and as close to perfect as poetry is allowed to be and still be poetry. great job, hun. -Glass

On Wednesday September 28th, 2005, NikesRain (1422) writes:

*hugs* good to have you here again and this was beautifully dark in its flowing of life's cirlce...outstanding

On Tuesday September 27th, 2005, Sin (1639) writes:

each of your writes has such flowing grace its like watching silk dance in the wind...again im so glad youre back ~kristy

On Tuesday September 27th, 2005, SamoneDrone (407) writes:

you truely have a style that i've never seen pulled-off so well. this was written so beautifully. ....-samone

On Tuesday September 27th, 2005, evolve (2247) writes:

Brilliant. I missed this...I almost forgot..how spectacularly your writes warm my spine and how I forget to have to wet my lips to appease my dry throat..almost.

On Tuesday September 27th, 2005, evolve (2247) writes:

Winding and sweeping..I could almost wrap these words around my finger. You are quite the poet sir, and this..

On Tuesday September 27th, 2005, evolve (2247) writes:

..this shone.

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