DarkPoetry -|- mysticventures -|- the sin

the sin

ripped from the heart of man

a helpless soul

is left floundering

in oblivion

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such is the sin

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of suicide

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On Monday January 28th, 2008, italianbella (295) writes:

powerful intence great write

On Saturday June 25th, 2005, SorrowSoul (73) writes:

So much is said with these chosen words. Very well done

On Friday March 18th, 2005, An Expired Member (14) writes:

wow..u really captured the feeling with this...it was awesome

On Sunday December 12th, 2004, Mr King (623) writes:

Ouch.. Powerful thunderingly direct piece! That one hurt. Excellent write. 1, Seth

On Saturday December 11th, 2004, An Expired Member (5) writes:

remindes me of me. very compelling work. even though its short, it makes perfect sence. very awesome.

On Friday December 3rd, 2004, Zophiel (349) writes:

It's nice to see a piece like this that rises above instead of descending below.

On Saturday November 20th, 2004, Lotophagi (451) writes:

very powerful and compelling.... short, emphatical, and punctuated brilliantly. Awesome write.

On Thursday November 18th, 2004, The Kid Of Corruption (148) writes:

Aint that the truth. Cool pc brother I like it.

On Monday November 15th, 2004, JiNx (142) writes:

Wow not sure what to even say... Great write -JiNx(ie)

On Monday November 15th, 2004, sIo (892) writes:

good reminder to all those on dp.

On Monday November 15th, 2004, DarkWolf (447) writes:

..this is powerful.. you take away all the romantacism placed on suicide.. that is certainly a good thing.. -Michael

On Sunday November 14th, 2004, mysticventures (546) writes:

my thanks and love to you Zhee :)

On Sunday November 14th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

Agreed.

On Sunday November 14th, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:

you captured this magnificently! absolutely brilliant... loved it....*favs*

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