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Each one wants to lead

Stepping on each others toes

In the waltz of life

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On Sunday November 28th, 2004, blue (1749) writes:

Kakko ii !!! that was so cool, a wonderful write!! B

On Wednesday November 3rd, 2004, Blood of Winter (367) writes:

so very true...such a universal concept

On Saturday October 16th, 2004, An Expired Member (5) writes:

Cool haiku! the simple lines tell all that need to be known, like a whisper in your head gently saying those few words... great! by the way, I see that you listen to Moody Blues! :) I am a big fan of theirs!

On Wednesday October 6th, 2004, Zophiel (349) writes:

I wrote about a field of grass damnit! How am I supposed to compete. Well done MV. :)

On Wednesday October 6th, 2004, ElegantKiss (401) writes:

So simple and so true. Lovely.

On Wednesday October 6th, 2004, An Expired Member (75) writes:

exactly!!!*SmileZ*Wonderful expression!!!

On Wednesday October 6th, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:

soooo true... i agree you can capture a flood in a tear...truly wonderful work!

On Wednesday October 6th, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (181) writes:

Very Cool Haiku. Thanks. GPhD.

On Wednesday October 6th, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (193) writes:

what can i say, but wonderful. A_C

On Wednesday October 6th, 2004, DarkWolf (447) writes:

How is it you can say so much with so little.. I guess that is why they call it talent.. and you obviously have it. Killer work.. love the insight. -Michael

On Wednesday October 6th, 2004, Solace (1424) writes:

I'm happy to be led by a beautiful dancer any day...

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