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Nobody's Fool

Teacher

Preacher

Cosmic leecher

Go suck the life from some other creature

I don't need your dogma

I don't need your rule

Keep your hands out of my pockets

For I'm nobody's fool

Got to pay for salvation?

Are you outta your fucking mind?

It's all free for the taking!

Do you think I am blind?

I've watched and I've listened

And I've witnessed your crap

If I followed your faith

Tis' my free thought you would trap

For my mind - is the universal mind

Never to be ensnared

Only to be experienced

Only to be shared

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On Monday April 7th, 2008, wilted (303) writes:

I've tried to write something like this before and always failed. You definitely nailed it, though. I love the caustic and biting tone.

On Thursday March 16th, 2006, Grey Lies (227) writes:

....hehe

On Monday November 15th, 2004, JiNx (142) writes:

True *agrees with SCANDAL* -JiNx(ie)

On Wednesday October 6th, 2004, An Expired Member (75) writes:

beautiful...*smilez*-ScandaL

On Tuesday October 5th, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:

_hard hitting and provoking in it's eloquence...with a message that anyone could grasp.well done,mystic.as always.

On Tuesday October 5th, 2004, Wizmodios (2) writes:

Nice!

On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, An Expired Member (58) writes:

so frikkin brilliant!

On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (229) writes:

sweeeet.

On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, lordshadow (212) writes:

this is exactly how I feel about the topic...word for word summarizes my every thought about this. awesome man.

On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, An Expired Member (26) writes:

...oooo..love this...down with organized religion!!! *storms the whitehouse*

On Friday October 1st, 2004, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:

i grew up forced to go to church, and some catholic school, i feel this, alot.

On Friday October 1st, 2004, Graveyard_Desciple (49) writes:

this was beautifully written. It is great to read works that I can relate to. Great write. -Randy-

On Friday October 1st, 2004, Trapped_with_Insanity (131) writes:

lovely, expertly captures the truth behind others words. I am extremly taken by " pay for salvation"...isn't this how some see it? Beautifull piece of work. ~Diviana~

On Thursday September 30th, 2004, An Expired Member (46) writes:

oh the joy of being able to relate to such wonderful pieces! nice work, it holds very strong truth, and it gets down to the point, very basically. magnificently worded.

On Thursday September 30th, 2004, DarkWolf (447) writes:

Wickedly well done Mystic! Indeed, indeed. Loved this one. So true in so many ways.. very well worded. I can relate to this one very well. -Michael

On Thursday September 30th, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:

raw... cuts down to the bone! i loved the idea...wonderful flow.. amazing write!

On Thursday September 30th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:

very strong and i love the truth behind it. really great

On Thursday September 30th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:

yes, this is a very strong piece. and it speaks of the truth. lovely job i must say..-calamity

On Thursday September 30th, 2004, Whisper (137) writes:

This write is strong and true. There are so many people in the world who act just like this. Filthy leeches! ~Whisper~

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