DarkPoetry -|- mysticventures -|- and on and on and on (a haiku)

Softly my soul sings

The song of eternity

And the beat goes on

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On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, lordshadow (211) writes:

haikus are kind of risky and definitely hard to get right, but you pulled it off flawlessly and without much effort to get your point across while sticking to the format... very nice.

On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, An Expired Member (46) writes:

i have to agree with everybody else. short, simple, nicely done, and very delicate. beautiful but simplistic piece!

On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, Zophiel (399) writes:

! Bravo

On Thursday September 30th, 2004, DarkWolf (442) writes:

Delicate and sweet.. very nicely done. -Michael

On Thursday September 30th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:

so short and simple.. but , very well done to say the least..i really like this ;> lovely work

On Thursday September 30th, 2004, ElegantKiss (399) writes:

Mm. :)

On Thursday September 30th, 2004, Zhee (638) writes:

this says so much... i am still following all the places my mind is going with this ...:)

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