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"Blessed/Cursed Ego" by mysticventures

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Without you

I am nothing

And I am lost



Before you

I am helpless

And I am weak



Thru you

I am driven

And I am tried



Because of you

I am tortured

And I am blind



Within you

I am wizened

And I am learned



From you

I am delivered

And I am free


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On Monday October 11th, 2004, elisa (2021) writes:
as the emotional scale tries to find a balance our feelings seem to be measured by the weight of value we place on them...the heavier the sadness the more enlightened the happiness and so on....this poem sparks a lot of thought:) elisa


On Wednesday October 6th, 2004, mysticventures (546) writes:
this piece is very special to me - thanks for reading and commenting :)


On Wednesday October 6th, 2004, An Expired Member (75) writes:
Wow...This is powerful...Thanx for sharing!!!*ScandaL*


On Thursday September 30th, 2004, NikesRain (1475) writes:
Truths said with such clarity and honesty. Not everyone can look so truthfully at themselves and express it so well. Nicely done.


On Wednesday September 29th, 2004, sixsixnine (492) writes:
i've missed you.. this piece is so meaningful .. like all your works are to me... this is breath taking... never stop


On Wednesday September 22nd, 2004, Recycled (161) writes:
I liked the lack of excess words. The spacing was really well used.


On Wednesday September 22nd, 2004, sexually_sadistic (499) writes:
excellent write! ~sex~


On Tuesday September 21st, 2004, The Kid Of Corruption (148) writes:
Hmmm, I like this. This person must be real special to you, nicely done mystic


On Monday September 20th, 2004, Zophiel (349) writes:
Ach! Does it never end! You fill my head with positivity. But I can't keep up! My comment count multiplies alarmingly in order to keep pace. :)


On Monday September 20th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
Oh, woe to the me that is me, and the responsibility to simply "be." ~Shane~


On Monday September 20th, 2004, mysticventures (546) writes:
Oh Elegantkiss - you toy with me!! :)


On Monday September 20th, 2004, ElegantKiss (401) writes:
Nice. "Thru you i am driven" I like that line.. Or mayhaps I just like the idea of being driven through/by someone.


On Monday September 20th, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:
absolutely beautiful..traverses through pain and just lifts the spirit to some place divine!



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