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one wish

To see

beyond the self-imposed

walls off illusion

To dwell

in the creative principle

that I am

To finally

witness life and creation

as one

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On Monday February 12th, 2007, lajeeves (59) writes:

huh...?

On Thursday August 26th, 2004, suicideseason (2128) writes:

_well done,mystic.i agree with the captain...zen like indeed...this holds so much tranquility in its wisdom.

On Wednesday August 25th, 2004, capt_funguy (993) writes:

ahhhh ... nice slice of zen pie ... actually slowed my heartbeat a bit when i read it .... i think you're on to something ... too cool man ... funguy

On Wednesday August 25th, 2004, Zophiel (399) writes:

A truly worth while goal.

On Tuesday August 24th, 2004, The Kid Of Corruption (146) writes:

Cool, parts of this write reminds me alot of myself and how I sometimes try to take an outside look at myself, like looking into a mirror sort of thing.

On Monday August 23rd, 2004, mysticventures (537) writes:

as a matter of fact ONEANDLONELY - yes , yes I have - many times in fact!

On Monday August 23rd, 2004, ONEANDLONELY (134) writes:

Have you read "Science Of Mind" by Ernest Holmes?

On Monday August 23rd, 2004, Northstar (453) writes:

I can really groove with the closing lines of this piece

On Monday August 23rd, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:

And we would all be the better for it. Good write, lovely idea. ~Wish Upon A Star

On Monday August 23rd, 2004, Munkey (88) writes:

You've a real Japenish/Chineseish flow to your words I like it. Keep it dark and flowin man -Munkey-

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