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"Windblown Desert Sands" by mysticventures

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On Wednesday September 13th, 2006, Bluegirl (243) writes:
this one has a very "empty" and "sad" feel to it. well done.


On Tuesday August 31st, 2004, sixsixnine (552) writes:
reminds me of the sand dunes here next to me about 30 miles.. something like a spiritual moment or expirience.. awesome! *669*


On Tuesday August 31st, 2004, An Expired Member (18) writes:
this is good simple moving great imagery i see it good write ~Ends


On Monday August 23rd, 2004, Munkey (88) writes:
So deep but so simple...makes me want to simplify myself. -Munkey-


On Sunday August 22nd, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
In Japanese, it's spelled 'hokku' w/an 'o'. Great job. With the title, I was almost misled into thinking of Iraq.


On Saturday August 21st, 2004, mysticventures (537) writes:
thanks guys - and yes it is Haiku


On Saturday August 21st, 2004, Anth (1609) writes:
i was gonna say haiku,but then i wasnt sure if i was technically correct,but yeah.lol


On Saturday August 21st, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:
...I actually really like this....the flicker of an image,lasting just a moment...then dissappearing again as quickly as it seems to have come...I really did feel this....Butterfly..xxx...p.s....anth,are you referring to a haiku,by any chance?


On Saturday August 21st, 2004, Anth (1609) writes:
brilliant!!,reminded me of the small japanese poems,so perfect,and speaking volumes,i really like this one


On Saturday August 21st, 2004, elisa (1990) writes:
you can do a lot of thinking in deserts like these:) elisa


On Saturday August 21st, 2004, Northstar (453) writes:
hmmm this image stirs up several feelings/ideas in me---desolation, strength despite opposition, simplicity, a captured moment in time both moving and still



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