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linger

these days I linger

a tormented soul

and long for that

which makes me whole

these day I wonder

thru the corridors of my mind

and long for the escape

I might never find

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On Tuesday August 17th, 2004, suicideseason (2128) writes:

_pure streams of thought...from the labyrinth of the mind...screams echoing off the walls of a doorless room.

On Sunday August 15th, 2004, sixsixnine (552) writes:

absolutely brutal... i'm left puzzled but in peace with this feeling.. you're so extreamly talented.. never stop ~matt

On Sunday August 15th, 2004, elisa (1990) writes:

A balance of hope and longing. very beautiful:) elisa

On Sunday August 15th, 2004, Storm (184) writes:

soft indeed.. got the waves of someone who silently surrenders but keeps the hope of one day finding all the missing pieces. Soft and calm...

On Sunday August 15th, 2004, manywalks (949) writes:

This flows soft through the mind, like a whisper nearly lost. Wonderful. ~ wen

On Sunday August 15th, 2004, mysticventures (537) writes:

thanks for the correction krystal

On Sunday August 15th, 2004, GirlintheBox (50) writes:

i like it...but only one thing is confusing me...when u say "these day", do u mean "this day" or "these days"? jw...great piece tho *krystal*

On Sunday August 15th, 2004, Northstar (453) writes:

love it! flow is like an undertow that swept me right through this piece...and swept this piece right through me--nicely done

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