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visions in I am

I am the divine spark

You see in your mother

your brother

your lover

For I am -

Love

I am the suckling foal

the evening tide

the thunderstorm

the rose

For I am -

Life

Manifest is all things

great and small

I am

That I am

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On Tuesday May 23rd, 2006, Zen (604) writes:

love love love the universal solution; its great isnt it?

On Thursday December 9th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (980) writes:

This was simple yet elegant. You said a lot with few words. Very thought provoking, nicely done:) ~Ship!

On Tuesday August 17th, 2004, suicideseason (2128) writes:

_Twi has it right...this piece screams awareness.

On Wednesday August 11th, 2004, Twilight (2097) writes:

this was awesome, a new day births the new hopes of another tomorrow. through acceptance and awareness. well done.

On Saturday August 7th, 2004, Zara Synn (75) writes:

Love the descriptions of Life; The evening tide and the rose - paints a beautiful picture.

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, sixsixnine (552) writes:

you don't stop amazing me;) love the feel of this! *669*

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, Anth (1609) writes:

its a kind of grand unified theory,of poitiveness and truth,and expressed in a manifestation that is without flaw,clear and brilliant

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, xX pretty vacant Xx (79) writes:

fucking hell that was beautiful... there's something about your words here that were haunting. i love it.

On Tuesday August 3rd, 2004, Zhee (638) writes:

lovely and serene...

On Tuesday August 3rd, 2004, manywalks (949) writes:

Mystic, ahhh, this was soft and near perfect. A calming piece to read. ~ wen

On Tuesday August 3rd, 2004, Whisper (136) writes:

This is a very nice write. I love it. -BT-

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