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I know there’s a universe inside you
fearful of where I may tread
in danger
--I may pick an improper flower
            …skip rocks into rivers whom find it hard enough just to flow
I’ve heard the laugh of a little girl
--with my ear pressed against your chest--
as she bound into the tidal’s
             of an insomniac sea
She fell into silence
lacking a savior
--For I was too weak to jump walls you refused to let crumble

             …traced my fingertips across your hallow
             --hoped to find hidden crevices
                         to crawl beneath your skin
                       to save Hope from drowning
Walls collapsed
--far too late
A scrap of a girl
             left to resuscitate
a muted voice
within a mouth that held the verdict
                         For, without Hope
                                     I fear Love dies of loneliness



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On Tuesday February 15th, 2005, frozen (741) writes:
THIS is an incredible poem.


On Sunday February 6th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1231) writes:
wow...any comment just wouldn't do this justice...AWESOME!!! ~AoD


On Sunday February 6th, 2005, The Red Phenix (7) writes:
Wonderful work.


On Saturday January 29th, 2005, Six-Out (1820) writes:
And what is life without hope? What is life without love? This piece gave me too many images to count, and my heart might've skipped a few beats. The ending drew blood. Exquisite work.


On Friday November 12th, 2004, Endifference (258) writes:
What, words? One. WOW! -END-



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