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"Dance" by Dolly_Fatale

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There's a woman
and she's suffocating
beneath the whirlwinds of reality
She's all caught up
within the cobwebs of personality
and there are tears that fall like rain
musical tyranny
pitter-patterring off concrete
telling stories laced with irony
Of a little girl
who drowns within the woman
the woman who straight-jackets her up within the facade
of who she dreams to be

I wanted to tell her secrets, that little girl
build a river out of her despair
and sail it with paper ships down a trail
leading so far away
but the little girl is silenced
unbearable memories muted
of a childhood filled with unnameables

So i'll hold you close
and with lips pressed against your chest
i'll sing you secrets
hoping the little girl inside will hear
and dance
.
.
.
and dance



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On Sunday February 6th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1231) writes:
aww..AWESOME!! wow..you amaze me


On Friday July 23rd, 2004, capt_funguy (993) writes:
beautiful subtlety ... much style and grace ... an apparent ease ... wonderful /unusual approach ... great write ... funguy


On Wednesday July 28th, 2004, purr_verse (1427) writes:
yes, i agree with funguy completely... beautiful and subtle, gentle... with quiet hope... lovely piece. :)


On Thursday July 15th, 2004, so_skeevy (76) writes:
i like this


On Thursday July 15th, 2004, glasshouse (780) writes:
I love this piece. I love it. I'll be reading more as well. If all your pieces have this much raw imagery and emotion, you'll have a great stay here. Loved it. -Glass


On Sunday July 11th, 2004, Bast (895) writes:
very lovely, sexy girl!


On Monday July 12th, 2004, Dolly_Fatale (31) writes:
wow, you think im sexy!


On Sunday July 11th, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (193) writes:
good. i liked this, i will definatly read more. A_C


On Monday July 12th, 2004, Dolly_Fatale (31) writes:
well thankew. i can't promise new works will come quickly (i'm just starting to write again after a 2+ yr block), but thanks's for the encouragement and hopefully what's to come sustains your interest


On Thursday July 15th, 2004, glasshouse (780) writes:
I'm glad you started again, you've got a lot of talent. Dont stop. I'll be crushed. -Glass


On Thursday July 15th, 2004, Dolly_Fatale (31) writes:
Thank you a lot, darlin'. Your words mean much. Hopefully I never become blocked again. I, aswell, will be crushed if I do.



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