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Why do you look at me like that?
You're hideous!
Wretched BEAST!

Can't you just go away?
Quit trying and do it right!
Lousy soul!

Why do you mock me?
Staring like that.
Find a new friend!

Leave me alone!
I can't stand your lies!
This is your ending.
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HA! Look at you now!
Broken, lying on the floor
Who's better now?
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You're still staring at me,
Damn I hate mirrors.




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On Monday August 30th, 2004, Vindicated_untouchable (23) writes:
I share your hatred... We should start an army... ~Katie~


On Thursday August 26th, 2004, Twilight (2097) writes:
i think its fine the way it is-i thought it was kinda of an awkward read until the ending-the ending made it what it is. awesome work.


On Wednesday August 25th, 2004, Anth (1609) writes:
good poem,fast paced,but i feel you should take out or change the very last line to give it more weight


On Wednesday August 25th, 2004, scorpionstale (27) writes:
I wasn't sure how to end this peice, any reccomendations?



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