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"5 AM Thoughts" by Chalin

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take everything
i offer.
my hands burn
from the weight.

wait for
all you want,
forget about your
promises and

Possiblities;
days count down,
waiting for a decision.

you could come home.
i won't expect
your presence to
alter the balance

all you want is
to see my bruised
naked body sobbing
for your touch.



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On Saturday March 4th, 2006, Thorn (434) writes:
There's something about being awake in the early morning hours that seems to spark poetic inspiration... Very nice write.


On Friday June 18th, 2004, aXe FactoR (426) writes:
a certain degree of pain...depth and meaning..excellent write. -MeL-


On Wednesday August 27th, 2003, Chameleon (120) writes:
I really liked this piece, too. It is simple yet has so many avenues. The last stanza is great.


On Wednesday August 27th, 2003, manywalks (949) writes:
Poignant and frantic, pulling he reader ever further down into its maze of meaning and possibilities, excellent. ~ mw


On Friday August 22nd, 2003, CharlottesWeb (615) writes:
Too many directions this one could veer off into. I will speak of the first one I ran...even though I might be totally off. I thought resigned...giving in and in a way...liking it. Enjoyed this. :)


On Friday August 22nd, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (763) writes:
Sounds like giving in. This...touches me. Saddens me.


On Monday August 18th, 2003, Bast (895) writes:
melancholy, almost resigned... this is a weighty piece...


On Monday August 18th, 2003, Deliverence (797) writes:
Well this is something..The thoughts are many, but the actions are few..-Kefka



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