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Melted wax, from last nights candles,
Is resting on my bedside table.
The morning, like a hangover,
Has over keened my senses.
The withered rose, in the vase,
Is still sitting in my window sill,
Why do I continue to give it water?
Strands of scent still fill the room
From the incense long burned out.
The tears are still wet in my pillow,
All of this because I woke up
And you were gone.




I wrote this after a really close friend of mine had comitted suicde, this poem always reminds me of her, and so I almost always cry when I read it. Its probably one of the very few non sadistic ones I have.



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On Wednesday March 1st, 2006, XTwistedOrchidX (108) writes:
... We water it until there's no chance that it'll be around... And after that as well... Forever in our hearts, and I know how you feel here, trust me.


On Sunday December 11th, 2005, Lydia Jade (790) writes:
wow...heartfelt and beautifull...~hugs~...your awsome


On Saturday March 20th, 2004, Bluegoddess (61) writes:
*sheds a tear for raven*


On Saturday May 31st, 2003, blackdarkness (311) writes:
This was very moving...also sad..i like how you used your words...very well written...wonderful


On Tuesday May 20th, 2003, hate_doll (328) writes:
I really like this...like, amazing...my boyfriend didn't commit suicide but he was taken away...this sent me relief...beautiful work...(!)


On Friday May 9th, 2003, An Expired Member (32) writes:
It feels like a continuing empty...I have felt the loss to...but who knows truly if death is as terminal as we all think..Despite the ambigouity...I feel for your loss..


On Tuesday May 6th, 2003, IceDragoness (251) writes:
I'm really sorry about your friend, this is a very lovely poem, I like it a lot, take care ~Dawn


On Friday May 9th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:
I like and I'm sorry about your friend she had to of ment a lot to u (like most friends do)...


On Thursday March 27th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:
beautiful piece. :) Its sad when someone you know dies, let alone a good friend. I can't even imagine...


On Wednesday March 19th, 2003, King_Crazy_Dave (422) writes:
wow.


On Wednesday March 12th, 2003, An Expired Member (2) writes:
I think this is the best short poem i've ever read.It's not somethin you make up for the hell of it.It means something, and thats the twist. Im sorry about your friend, i know how it feels to lose those close. Good luck writing your really good!


On Tuesday March 11th, 2003, Jonas (867) writes:
moving is right. this poem is a deep shade of blue


On Monday March 10th, 2003, cre (508) writes:
very sad but excellent write. good job.


On Sunday March 9th, 2003, An Expired Member (3) writes:
this is a wonderful write. your incorporation of imagery and word usage is wonderful. keep up the wonderful work.


On Saturday March 8th, 2003, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (164) writes:
very sad but I'm sure we can all relate to how you feel one way or another Thanx for sharing!


On Saturday March 8th, 2003, dark_sister (5) writes:
That was moving. Thanks.


On Saturday March 8th, 2003, An Expired Member (10) writes:
very nice poem i know how it is to lose a friend =o( -PoP RoXx n KoKe-


On Tuesday July 15th, 2003, boughtwithblood (296) writes:
very powerful. very tangible and visual.



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